New · Paragraph Builder

You've got the topics. Now make every paragraph count.

Paste your statement. We find your topics, keep the strongest 3 or 4, and give you a task sheet for every paragraph, so you can rewrite it yourself, in your own words.

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Paragraph 1 of 3

Minimum wage EPQ

Needs depth

Task 1Pin down what Card and Krueger tested

Task 2Explain your hours finding

Task 3Say who should act differently

For my EPQ I investigated whether the 2016 National Living Wage cut jobs in retail. Reading Card and Krueger showed me that Task 1. Using ONS data, I found that Task 2. This matters because Task 3.

Each coloured gap is filled with what you wrote for that task.

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You have your super-curriculars, but your paragraphs need work

The Paragraph Builder strengthens the topics you already have.

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What you get

Everything is built from your own statement and your five courses.

Your 3 or 4 strongest topics

Judged on fit with all your courses, how developed each is, and how well it follows your introduction. Plus what to cut: awards, careers talk, school lessons.

Three tasks for every paragraph

Short, specific tasks: what to reread or look up, with real examples, and exactly what to write.

An outline to write from

Your own facts in a light structure, with a coloured gap for each task. We never write what you learned.

Feedback on your introduction and conclusion

What works, what's missing and what to change, so the whole statement tells one story.

How it works

1
Paste your statement
As it stands, rough or not, plus your courses. If you've had a review with us, it's filled in for you.
2
Work through your task sheets
On screen in a few minutes and emailed to you. Do the tasks, then write each paragraph from its outline.
3
Get your full review
Rate your task sheets to unlock the review included with your purchase, and check the rewritten statement.

It stays your statement

We guide, you write. The sheets never write what you learned, and the starters are only a guide. UCAS checks every statement for similarity, and universities can tell when one doesn't sound like you.

Strengthen every paragraph, then get it reviewed

Task sheets for every paragraph, plus a full review. One payment of £10 at our launch price.